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王梦媛
公交车上
发表时间:2008-09-16 18:52
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晁依涵
2017-10-16 13:43
对百善孝为先,,,写的很好哦!!!!!还可以来看看我的作文!!!!!!
晁依涵
2017-10-15 17:59
对,百善孝为先。。。
米乐佳
2015-08-19 14:55
值得我们学习的小英雄。
田克纯
2015-07-12 20:59
观察的很到位,尊老爱幼是中华的传统
l李新琪
2015-07-09 11:35
写的不错加油,百善孝为先。
周珂屹
2015-07-07 17:56
小作者在公交车上看到一个小男孩尊老爱幼的行为感动,我们也要像那个小男孩一样尊老爱幼。文章写的不错,继续努力、加油!
韩煜烁
2015-07-07 11:24
不错,加油!!!!!
谭途
2015-07-06 20:20
在外在家都要表现一样,从小到大都要这样,是个懂事的孩子
宋梦洋
2015-07-03 14:02
真是一个好孩纸呀·························································································································································································································································································································································································
赵如许
2015-07-02 14:54
写的还不错。加油!!!
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